Sunday, February 13, 2011

बाहर जानें से पहलें अब इत्तला नहीं करतें...............................

एक पिता ने ,
अपने बच्चें को,
खुद भूखा रहकर बड़ा किया..
बड़े होकर बच्चें नें,
पिता को घर के बाहर,
भूखा ही खड़ा किया..


6 comments:

  1. क्या बात है भाई तुमने तो दुखती रग पर हाथ रख दिया बहुत ही उम्दा गज़ल है जियो जियो........

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  2. its very much true ...... nice thaiught if u write like this 1 day u will be greatest poet & i will say my children ye kamina kavi ban gaya bhaut maar khai hai mujhse isne bhaut galiya khai hai...... lol

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  3. I agree with preetiji, you have the potentialities of a great shaayar, perhaps you are already. you have the sensitivity and the intensity of expression. Keep it up. God bless you.

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  4. rang aa gaya hai roshnai me roshni wala..
    bas tum apne hantho ko chalate rahena...

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